In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leaves to study or work somewhere else.
Do you think this trend has more advantageous or disadvantages.
In today's world, sedentary lifestyles chosen by the single-person require to leave the warm family nest at a young age due to work or study. Despite some negative points that this trend may include, I believe that its drawbacks are surely far outweighed by the potential benefits.
Leaving early, young people can have an opportunity to experience a new life which brings them about several positive points. To begin with, the young can enjoy living independently, making them far-sighted and self-reliant. This is because they are expected to cope with such daily life difficulties as preparing meals, paying bills, and drawing a realistic budget for their future. Furthermore, those who leave their family to work or study elsewhere would have a chance to experience more privacy, by which I mean they tend to share their lives with their partners, thus taking more responsibility and practicing how can they manage their personal lives and emotional relationships. What is more, as adolescence is a period that adolescents and their parents usually have conflicts with each other, those who decide to leave their families after high school would enjoy avoiding such arguments and restrictions, leading to experience enjoyment and close relationship with their immediate families.
On the other hand, the negative consequences of leaving the family at the beginning of early youth should not be denied. These young single people may face financial issues which have already been taken care of by their parents, but now they should not only overcome such monetary crisis in their lives but also provide the household expenses. In addition, instead of enjoying warm home-maid meals, they will have to have a takeaway or learn how to cook. Nevertheless, such difficulties that might be faced with young individuals living alone are all though life lessons that sooner or later they would counter them which not only are they part of growing up, but also they would result in learning how to be independent.
In conclusion, it appears to me that in spite of going through some financial matters and poor diet, young single individuals living on their own are more likely to feel self-improvement, more privacy, and less conflict in such a lifestyle involved, provided that their family support them emotionally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leaving
...les chosen by the single-person require to leave the warm family nest at a young age due...
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Line 9, column 548, Rule ID: ALLTHOUGH[2]
Message: Did you mean 'although'?
Suggestion: although
...with young individuals living alone are all though life lessons that sooner or later they ...
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Line 13, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their family support them emotionally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24128686327 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79324919862 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571045576408 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1749389356 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.916666667 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231847415955 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856716687283 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434111505551 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135195575306 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455540853787 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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