Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is certainly true that art plays a fundamental role in society as artist are able to express their thoughts and their culture in their work. Many people argue that spending budget behind arts is waste of money and this money can be used for different fields by government. In my opinion, I partially agree with this statement with reasonable example.
To begin with, a chunks of individual believe that art is also play an important role in everyone lives. Firstly, students can learn about new creativity in art events such as learning a 3D-sketch, new types of drawing and many others learn for creating art event in different level as city, district, state, national. For example, a survey done by Oxford University show that 75 percent artist is made for watching art computation. Secondly, art is the best way to find new creativity in any people. For example, any people can learn about their interest to involving different computations as drawing, painting, and many others. Overall, Government should spend money for art because art is only way to develop skill in different arts as well as art computation can be allured to wart art.
However, on the flip side of coins, many people suggest that this budget is waste of money and this can be used in different fields. Firstly, many governments reduced budget of art and used this money for healthcare. For example, Government of India spent more money in healthcare compared to others in last years, because this year corona virus was the big problem in India, which is more beneficial to reduce these cases. Apart from this, government can spend money for infrastructure, which is more beneficial for visitor to show new building. For example, Government of Gujarat recently created world's highest statue in the world and nowadays this place is allured not only other state peoples but also come to visit other countries. All-in-all, government use art's budget in different field as infrastructure and healthcare.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding government spend budget for art, as far as I am concerned that spending money in different fields is more beneficial compared to arts because healthcare facilities and Infrastructure are most important department for developing growth of any country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10610079576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7968026871 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509283819629 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2695438698 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276945099448 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113680567227 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846044683727 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190058924778 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770089700355 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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