In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?
It is believed that childhood obesity increases a great concern on some nations. This essay will outline the reasons behind the recent phenomenon as well as the plausible solutions, which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
First of all, one of the reasons for a public concern in many nations about overweight children is that the availibility of twenty-four seven restaurants, McDonald’s, serving various types of fast-food items. It is obvious that, American parents are completely like fast food as a staple diet in which this is poor children’s diet preferences and lack of nutrional value. Furthermore, sedentary lifestyle choosen by juveniles being addicted to video-games activities is reasons of lack physical activities. For instance, Minecraft favorite game of American kids which arouse them to stay on screen for hours increasing snack time and gaining overweight, even worse accute diseases at an earlier stage.
Regarding aforementioned factors, the profound solution relates to parental controls which have to manage healthiest alternative food to replace their children’s favourites. Both of baked potato wedges and oatmeal cookies become alternative homemade food recommendation. Therefore, parents are being an importance role to set wellness nutrition fulfillment of the children’s physical growth. In addition, the key of healthy lifestyle is balancing victuals consumed with regular physical activities to maintain an ideal weight. Especially, preschoolers have to be active sixty-minute exercise throughout the day minimally, such as gymnastics which burn saturated fats and calories.
To sum up, several reasonable factors lie behind a phenomenon of children easily gaining obesity including lack of functional foods and of physical schedules. Indeed, this may highlight several solutions on those issues such as parental control on diet intake and routine exercise habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09578530028 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0924392133 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927423563599 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313454251635 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313927522437 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540348474997 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202718517933 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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