In many countries people are moving away from rural areas to urban areas . What problems can this cause?
The countryside people are increasingly moving to urban areas, making the greater population in cities due to plenty of reasons. According to me the trend lead to numerous detrimental problems of the society that i would explain further.
On the one hand, people are moving to large cities and there are various reasons behind this phenomenon. Firstly, the unemployment rate is rising fast than ever as population in the rural areas is growing that boosts the demand for shelter, food and clothes. However, due to unemployment people have been living under poverty line. To be more specific, despite of diligent study and stellar credential from prestigious universities people remain un-hired that results in poverty. On the contrary, in cities employment can be found easily as city provides good employment opportunities in every field such as medical, industries, schools and enhances the chance of jobs for jobless people. Secondly, villages and tows are not progressed that is why people migrants to urban areas as nowadays people are literate and wish to live a high standard of living. Finally, moving from towns to cities also reflects the social status of people being that city dwellers have a lot of facilities. Therefore, in order to taking advantage of innovations people reside in cities.
On the other hand , along with benefits of living in a city there are some issues attached to it that is necessarily needs to address, otherwise it can have harmful effects. First of all, if more and more people will go to urban areas then cities would become overcrowded that would brings scarcity of natural resources in those areas. Besides this, danger of spread of pendamic is where people are living in highly population. So, it can have many adverse impact on the city population. Last but not least, in rural areas predominantly older and children are living as young ones are moving to cities to find jobs that is not a positive development of towns.
To conclude, although people should adopt new innovations and should know about city life yet i believe that they should not leave villages because it will remain underdeveloped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09322033898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69354699193 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570621468927 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4212505709 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25838496761 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809383451264 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431150605624 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136652906499 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760557842699 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.