In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?
Due to the advances in Medicine, and increased health awareness in recent years, people’s overall lifespan has significantly improved. This trend, however, has resulted in a controversial debate among people. While some find an aging population challenging for governing bodies, others believe that having many senior citizens is beneficial. In my opinion, the former view is far outweighed by the latter.
On the one hand, there is a concrete reason why some people think it is hard for the government if there are many elderlies in a country. It is a burden on the government’s budget. To be more specific, as people age and become older, they tend to struggle with different health problems. In this case, it is governments to improve healthcare system by funding to meet the high demand. Additionally, if the number of elderly people is high, it is more likely to be many retired people. This means government need to provide them with retirement pensions which, in turn, can lead to strain on the budget. Therefore, it is thought to be negative by some.
Nevertheless, the advantages older people can offer are far greater than the disadvantages. Firstly, older people often possess valuable experience and skills accumulated over their careers, meaning they can contribute to a more knowledgeable and stable workforce, enhancing productivity and quality of work. Another advantage is that they can transfer intergenerational knowledge. In other words, an aging population can help the handover of wisdom, traditions, and knowledge from older generations to younger ones, which can foster cultural continuity and preserving valuable insights. From these perspectives, the elderly play a crucial role in society.
In conclusion, despite the pressure on the budget of the government, it is worthwhile funding as old people can be helpful in terms of improving productivity in workplaces and interchanging customs amid generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40460526316 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15105996929 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5605597806 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300243414924 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866664459732 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771210103923 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163165714232 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603493928499 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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