In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?
Due to the high-quality health services, life expectancy has recently expanded in certain countries. While some individuals consider this phenomenon as burdens on the country government’s shoulders, I believe that older generations have still offered some positive benefits to their society and communities by their own abilities.
On the one hand, elderly individuals require some specific care from governments and their families, given by their gradually deteriorating capabilities in terms of social contributions and personal nourishment. Compared to their period of youth, the aging population is now unable to work energetically and hold significance in a company’s operation to create certain remarkable values.
Older generations may not generate physical achievements at their age, they, otherwise, sacrifice their life for a certain community in their own ways that align with their current health conditions. With long-term experiences in their career path, the older is able to serve as consultancy positions for their current business in which most workers are not obtaining enough equivalent knowledge and wisdom in the intensely competitive market. Furthermore, older generations can serve as a family treasure trope which contains historical stories. This invaluable contribution may not be found anywhere else except trustworthy resources of an aging population, even though there has been a strong support of technological equipment.
In conclusion, while it is undoubted that they somehow hold the overall development of a country slow down regarding government’s compulsory responsibilities towards older generations, aging population are still ready to offer their contributions to their community as the role of both a consultancy in a company and a invaluable witness in a family, given by their wealth of knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of both a consultancy in a company and a invaluable witness in a family, given b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83394833948 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32531089818 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6424818352 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.666666667 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877732767796 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402001026283 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332857594247 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636484299539 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216415205808 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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