In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages ?
In many countries, people are living longer than ever before. Some people say that an ageing population is a problem for governments. Others say that having more older people is good for society. I can understand both sides of the argument.
People who think there are benefits to society having more older people said that old people are reliable, trustworthy, they also have had a lot of experience and are skilled and wiser so they can do a lot of work and they also have a lot of time so they can take care of themtselves, spend time with their grandchildren and teach them lots of things.
But i agree with the side say that an ageing population create problems for government they say that elderly continue to work create less job for young people to work make a shortage of labour force in future also their pension make young people to work more for them. Elderly have more health problem so they go to doctor more so it take more time to meet a doctor and less time to cure also elderly are easier to get disease and it take lots of money to cure those disease. Elderly can make the traffic more dangerous by driving because of bad sight and reaction.
Eventhough i agree more to people say an ageing population is bad but not by much and i think that both side aren’t wrong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...for governments. Others say that having more older people is good for society. I can under...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...nk there are benefits to society having more older people said that old people are reliabl...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...en and teach them lots of things. But i agree with the side say that an ageing ...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...problem so they go to doctor more so it take more time to meet a doctor and less tim...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...lderly are easier to get disease and it take lots of money to cure those disease. El...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'those diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; those diseases
...sease and it take lots of money to cure those disease. Elderly can make the traffic more dang...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of bad sight and reaction. Eventhough i agree more to people say an ageing popu...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g population is bad but not by much and i think that both side aren’t wrong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44725738397 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31439887781 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472573839662 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.517327653 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.111111111 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432575355723 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211844712558 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13575330814 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303910321517 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127741119652 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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