In many countries, people in big cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
As the population of people living in big cities grows larger, the lifestyles of them change as well. People that live in urban tend to either live alone or in small family units for many reasons. That style of living is affecting a large number of aspect in the people’s lives.
Firstly, members of a small family units tend to get more privacy. It is due to the fact that they will get a lot more personal space or even a room for each person, not having to see each other every seconds in the house. Privacy is an important element for people to feel comfortable in their living space, make their home feels a whole lot more welcoming.
Secondly, living alone or in small family units means that there will be much less opinion to argue about. If they live alone, they can have everything run by their rules and do not have to follow or listen to anybody else’s opinion, it gives them more freedom to do things around the house. Not limited to that, no argument means that they will have a much more peaceful lifestyle, do not have to stress out more when they come home everyday.
Thirdly, groceries, electricity bills, etc. in big cities tend to cost a lot more than in the country side, that means living alone or in a small family is the most efficient way to save money. If there is a small number of mouth to feed, much less money will be needed.
To conclude, I think that living alone or in small family units in big cities is a positive trend for a large number of reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...sons. That style of living is affecting a large number of aspect in the people's lives. F...
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Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...r living space, make their home feels a whole lot more welcoming. Secondly, living al...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... to stress out more when they come home everyday. Thirdly, groceries, electricity bil...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...fficient way to save money. If there is a small number of mouth to feed, much less money will be ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s in big cities is a positive trend for a large number of reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42805755396 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23470481159 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496402877698 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9179632118 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268386111129 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116388446627 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116304428986 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191860960126 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112111709252 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.