In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this the case?
Is this a positive or negative development?
it has become the norm in different countries to see people wearing clothes originating from the West more often than their traditional ones. the main cause behind this trend is convenience and fashion that such modern clothing can offer, and therefore overall, it is a positive development despite certain drawback on one’s national identity.
The requirements of a typical customer are often prioritized in mass-produced Western apparel, such as jeans. In fact, the selected materials are often hard-wearing, a feature highly valued by individuals with hectic lifestyles, and competitively priced due to the employment of low-cost labour. And in combination, such features of western-syle fashion have gained huge popularity among less-developed countries, such South-East Asia as where the local fashion often fail to evolve to be in demand. Furthermore, western media is crucial in the dissemination of their fashion. it is apparent that increased exposure to western entertaiment has led to eagerness among the youth to embrace western-style clothing.
As a result, the popularity of western clothing brands has been an agent for change for the betterment of local fashion brands. Obviously, in order to regain customers, these local businesses have to adjust their design based on customers’ needs, and streamline their manufacturing process to reduce costs. Therefore, were there no competition from foreign products, the local fashion industry would remain stagnant, which was evident in many clothing manufacturers in Vietnam before the opening of economy. However, it should be of note that cultural values embedded in traditional clothes can be lost due to the widespread acceptence of foreign styles occuring in young generations. This could result in local cultural identities being deteriorated to a point where there is a huge loss of cultural diversity.
in conclusion, this western fashion trend is an outgrowth of effective business strategies as well as the spread of social media. However, it is imperative to not only take advantage of such development to foster local companies but also preserve traditional identies entrenced in local clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59214501511 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11022458289 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601208459215 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7734924874 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.214285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239460762353 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762353993209 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552877259908 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153968175308 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799614344512 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.