In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
On this recent times, western style of clothing is favoured by individuals in many countries over traditional fashion. This essay will outline the reasons behind the problem, however, I would initiate to greater disadvantages which I will elaborate.
First of all, one of noticeable reasons is that western style consisting formal attire is more likely presentable for professional life shaping individual’s personal value. Considering that, most of multinational companies require job applicants to wear suits in interview sessions in which appearance look become considerable assessment of ethic code in a workplace. Furthermore, along with long-term durability, jeans’ fabric composition can give wearer comfortable sense on each season particularly during winter. Natural Selection London presents that its extra layer of poly-blend cotton fibers as a thermal insulator that assure everyone keep on warmth.
On the other hand, we should emphasize some drawbacks of this is that more and more buyers have a fewer interest in traditional costumes. Reported by Springer Link, there is only small number of shops operate specifically selling traditional clothes nowadays. Due to uncategorized as a basic clothes, many economic activities in the field of traditional fashion have experienced losses or even bankruptcy. Moreover, the popular use of western clothing can lead to identity loss which has been experienced in Cambodia. This type of clothing clothing brings uniqueness and values representing some regions, so that lack of traditional costume enthusiast may contribute to cultural extinction in the long run.
To sum up, several reasonable factors lie behind an issue of western fashion impact in today’s era including a great fit clothes and comfortable to use. Meanwhile, I would refute the demerits of this ranging from lower people interest and cultural crisis.
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Suggestion: clothing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68197879859 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0561510408 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689045936396 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4243445602 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268501237111 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845799348846 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733150931145 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150933565152 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703860000176 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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