In many countries, plastic shopping bgs are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extend do you agree?
It is thought in most countries, that using plastic bags for shopping should stop because it resulting to water and land pollution. I strongly agree that it should be banned because its affect the environment and cause pollution that people and ecosystem will be at risk.
Rubbish cause by plastic bags will affect in our surroundings, keeping plastic materials for everyday living such as going to market and for buying items that are usually people using, aside from that like straws and other plastic items. Littering particularly, plastics are non biodegradable and it cannot be recycled and not be able to use for other productive purpose. Without proper sanitation and garbage disposal, plastic will blocked the drainage, resulted to flood during heavy rains. People throwing plastic in the sea will destroy the ocean and water species can eat the rubbish. Water pollutants affect the water sources, as a results, people may acquire diseases.
Plastic bags should be totally banned. Most countries started to implement by not using it, instead people bringing ecobag or paper bag for shopping. They also started to bring a container if people whats to purchase wet goods in the market. Other restaurant and fast foods are not allowing to use straws for their drinks.
In my conclusion, plastic bag should stop using in all countries, it has harmful effect to people and ecosystem,consequently, water and land pollution. Government started a plan to control this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22594142259 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79816544752 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5483959113 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255351881867 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957150374744 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732045940828 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165740127648 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601698854308 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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