A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the world.
Tourism industry is one of the major sources of financial income in every country. By means of this, it will promote and explore the culture of different places to offer. However, it has negative result if not managed accurately, not only by the tourist but locals too. I believe that tourism has more merits than demerits about this situation.
One evident advantage of development of tourism is that foreigners will discover and exploring the beautiful attraction, culture, food, nature and locals of the country they will visit. Nowadays, visitors are enjoying their vacation spending time with their friends and family going to other places that they never been through. By increasing number of tourist, it has a huge impact to help the locals as well as for economic growth. The government provides more jobs and opportunity to the citizen, such as, tour guide. Furthermore, tourist treasured all the memories that they experienced the places they went.
There are minor flaws that countries facing in handling rampant build up of tourist. Some travellers are not obeying the law the country they visit. Respecting and following the rules and policy should adhere to any places, especially if u will visit for the first time. On clear example of this is travelling to Middle East country, they have more restricted rules due to their Muslim religion and culture, like wearing seductive clothes, such as, short trousers and sleeveless, drinking alcoholic beverages are strictly prohibited.
In conclusion, all people can enjoy travelling to other country and experience their culture, but tourist should be sensitive and follow the law that they are implementing. The tourist and locals have both benefits for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61216221099 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4098030383 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103593470897 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372712664603 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579417596921 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717681033063 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712460327397 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.