In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem. What measures can be taken to solve it?
The topic of the poor standard of living is becoming a burning issue worldwide. The quality of life in large cities is becoming worse as compared to small cities. This approach has various root causes, which are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs along with the solutions.
To commence with, the first and the foremost cause is the high levels of pollution. To make it clear, in large towns masses use their private cars for travelling to work rather than public transport, which ultimately increases the air pollution, and brings several diseases towards citizens. For example, according to an article published in 'The Hindu', it was revealed that in Delhi, the air quality is more worse as compared to other states due to a huge number of cars on road. Apart from this, anti social activities also accountable for making people's life hard in big cities, as in metro cities people commit crime and robbery due to unemployment, which gives birth to new criminal activities among those masses, and make the cities dangerous for locals. Moveover, lack of social interaction is the third cause for the worseing condition in large cities. It is generally seen that in metropolitic cities people do not have time to spend with their family and friends, because of this they become introvert and also suffer from depression. Thus, these are the some root causes of the problem of low quality of life in large cities.
On the other hand, the first solution to tackle this problem is awareness. To be precise, government should encourage the people to recycle the used products for reducing the various type of pollution. For instance, the recent studies have demonstrated that if people recycle plastic waste, they will reduce 10 million tonnes plastic waste weekly. Futhermore, working population should balance their work life with personal life for spending some quality with their family and friends. Therefore, citizens in large cities should take some important steps to make their life better.
To sum up, although there are various causes of worse life quality in large cities, yet these causes can be solved by the efforts of government and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, third, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06722689076 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5024339069 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6134819536 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259436663065 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963692473558 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878008641219 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191359109985 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639885764677 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.