In many countries, schools have severe problems with students behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
The difficulties concern of student behavior is faced by numerous schools around the world. this essay will propose the upbringing method as the roots of the difficulties and, suggest moral education as a mandatory subject as a viable solution.
The family upbringing method is perceived as the main reason for juvenile delinquency because the family is the first provider of education for young people. If the youngster receives sufficient education such as religious education, morality and the principle of life from the parents at an early age, they would be a well-behaved and good behavior personality. As a result, they would avoid performing misconduct activity such as make a truant, cheating and fighting in the schools. Furthermore, in reality, most parents in today world are the working parent. they left the children in the day-care center and, spend insufficient time with them. Consequently, the children will not obtain the basic education supposed to be provided by the family. For the long-term, it would affect young people to behave in society or school.
The most practical solution to this problem is by including the moral subject as one of compulsory in the school curricula. The logic of this proposal because not all the children are taught morality at the home. The study had proven that school which included moral education as part of subject mandatory had a lower number of student misconduct behavior.
In conclusion, the family method in term of education the children at an early age is perceived as the main reason for student delinquent behavior. However, this problem could be solved by adding moral education as a compulsory subject in every school in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16245487365 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80234642506 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509025270758 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6499420385 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929985956694 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378365780808 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392907570111 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725555686077 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334464178923 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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