In many countries small shops and town centers are going out of business, because people tend to drive to the large out-of-town stores. This results in an increase in car use, and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores. Do you think advantages of such development outweigh its disadvantages?
It is undeniably true that, nowadays customers prefer huge shopping marts than a particular store. In some countries people who owns such shops in the towns are getting bankrupt, due to the reason stated above. Further, it has its own benefits and drawbacks. I believe that such changes outweigh the disadvantages over its advantages.
To begin with, the large out of town stores has their own advantages. For instance, it is convenient for them to target much greater customer then having only from a small town. This consequently leads the customer to travel long distance to shop which results in an increase of motor vehicles business. Also, the customers can satisfactorily purchase desired items from a single shop within time, thereby reducing unnecessary prevalent purchases monthly. Thus, expanding the business in various means. While, some of the people in small town are effected the most.
To Exemplify, the people who cannot afford the cars for long-distance remains deprived of the facilities outside the town. Also, the small shops get out of business as the masses shifting towards the trending commercialization. This seems to be like inflation where the rich get richer and poor get poorer. If the town centres and small shops will get slow down, the development of such towns will halt. Therefore, to overcome such a problematic scenario. People of their town should avoid going out and should try to in cultivate the jobs within their town and reach out to the world.
To sum up, Although in-town businesses are shutting down due to an increase in the large shops and factories, people in the town are left behind without facilities. I believe, its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...s advantages. To begin with, the large out of town stores has their own advantages. For in...
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Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74549724131 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3776800669 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415157076114 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110027714478 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09605031824 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237783430691 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081760765868 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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