Many countries spend a lot of money to make bicycles easier Why Is it the best solution for transport problems

Essay topics:

Many countries spend a lot of money to make bicycles easier.
Why?
Is it the best solution for transport problems?

A large sum of money to ease bicycle usage is invested by many nations. Even though the promotion of cycling is a viable solution to help reduce traffic congestion, it alone is not enough to solve such issues effectively.
The increase of bicycles’ use can alleviate traffic congestion as roads are crowded mainly by private cars. Countries that suffer from this deadlock problem spend lots of money to facilitate the bikers more as such investment implicitly promotes cycling to its citizens. For example, a few major European cities like Amsterdam focus on building the cycling track infrastructure to encourage citizens to do cycling conveniently instead of driving anywhere, resulting in a considerably reduced high level of traffic.
Although these projects significantly reduce traffic problems, bicycle usage alone is not the best solution as most people do not prefer to commute with the bike as their workplaces are located far from their houses. What is the best solution for this? If the governments dream of reducing traffic jams maximally, it will be better to build new transportation systems. For instance, Japan had built several fast trains to tackle traffic jams, and such trains will not add a new crowd to the main road because they are located below the ground.
In conclusion, investing much money in bicycle usage infrastructure may reduce traffic congestion. However, to have a more significant impact, the government needs to improve public transportation, which can be accessible to a larger group of individuals compared to a bicycle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95168833043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2965652009 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202760796004 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825796505977 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714017394054 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110274333296 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340731319877 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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