Many countries spend a lot of money to make bicycles easier
Why?
Is it the best solution for transport problems
In this modern era, many countries allocating a large amount of money to encourage the bicycling. The main reason of this investment is to make riders safer. However, cycling is not suitable for elderly.
Government should develop the cycling facilities to reduce the traffic accident. Furthermore, there are more traffic problem caused by public or private transportation. If many citizen riding a bicycle in their activity, transport rider are more likely to be safer. This because when people ride bicycles, cyclists automatically focus on riding. While other riders spend their time to do the other things like listening to music it causes accidents.
For instance, the new traffic laws from Japanese Government have been able to save some lives as the number of bicycle use is increasing along with greater safety riders, so many Japanese prefer to ride a avoid a fatal accident.
On the other hand, the rule of bicycle is not the best solution because not all residents are young people but also consist of elderly. When the latter cycling it will cause traffic problems, and this movement cause injury in accident . It is because cyclist need more power to use it. Biccyle is different way to ride it from another transporatio.. For instance, Government Kediri prohibited the elderly riding bicycle in main street due to many traffic problem.
In conclusion, many states invest their money to promote the use of bicycles to provide the safety riders, but this is not a great solution because factor aged for citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10756972112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62900943364 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9322916551 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230114634019 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679886039326 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627319311174 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128363460964 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384614837689 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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