In many countries, there are more people choose to live by themselves than before. What are the reasons of this situation? Is it positive or negative development of society?
In recent years, more people tend to live independently, which is quite different from several decades ago and this phenomenon is more obvious in metropolitan area among young adults. I will analyse the main reasons of this situation and the impacts on the development of society in this essay.
There are several reasons for people living by themselves. Firstly, the economic development results in the social resources concentrating on metropolis, where most young people tend to go in search for better job opportunities. Therefore, they have to leave their hometown to live in the urban alone. Besides, the prosperity of the Internet makes people more diversified, which means that their hobbies and ideas become more characterized. This tendency is particularly the case among younger generation, whose ideology is totally opposite to their elder counterpart. They emphasize on personal freedom, independence and unconstraint. Finally, the huge living cost in urban area has dropped the marriage rate as well. Compared with marrying which means overheads will inevitably increase, young people would rather live alone.
Obviously, this situation has more negative effects than benefits of society. Although from individual's perspective they may become more independent and liberated, actually it has some potential risks as well. For one thing, people have to pay more for their living budget since the rent and other necessities costs much higher for those living alone. Furthermore, living alone for long time will easily make people feel lonely which may even cause some psychological diseases. As they live without others, youth will gradually become less concern with how to care for others and this will lead to an indifferent atmosphere in society. In addition, from the long term, the decreasing marriage rate will cause the shortage of labour, which is definitely an adverse effect for the economy of the country.
In conclusion, it is the development of society that causes more people choosing living alone. Even though it has some merits for individual, this tendency has more negative influences on society as a whole.
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42261904762 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80848951906 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5936984388 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290448198236 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106765532657 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938713107281 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223899205129 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738482769124 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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