In many countries these days,the number of people continuing their education after school has increased and the range of courses available in universities and colleges has also increased.Do you think this is a positive or negative development
Gone on the days, today education play a vital role in human being life. In all nations dwellers have good co -education in their life. I think it is very good impacts in citizens. I am at positive side with this assertion. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of veiw in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, education is backbone in human life. Hence, they would be well education in their life but also they should be achieve every things in all life. Therefore, nowadays competition is upsurge day by day. It is very tough competition one to another person. For instance, toddlers, pupils, juveniles, adolescents and primitive etc.
Nevertheless, there is no denying the fact that dweller could be continuing course in the colleges and universities because it is will be good effect in the society. As far as, they should be grow knowledge day by day. Furthermore, today money is very imperative in their life. Last but not the least, they could be good impacts economy career and boom the education atmosphere.
In summarise, after analysing that entire issue,I reckon that, In my mind, education is golden chance in the human being life because they should be changing their life in own hardwork in their life.They should be good education in the life and it is good opporunities they choice better life but only they have be possible is as well as good education in the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84426229508 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67330005611 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.2926950216 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.875 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103362687525 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370752679592 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327772884696 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747582122303 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222365406982 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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