In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
It is true that many individuals in some nations are likely to live alone or in tiny family groupings instead of in larger ones. In my opinion, despite a number of inconveniences, this trend should be considered as a very welcome development.
On one hand, critics of living by themselves or with small families tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, citizens especially youngsters always like to have their own places so that they feel free to do things they want, hence, they access to various types of information on the internet and social networking sites without their parents' supervision. Teenagers can be easily lured into groups of online thugs, which appear frequently on some social media platforms, or violent and sexual images from television. Studies have also shown that people who have fewer relationships will hard to succeed in the future since they have no friends, connections, etc. This will limit their way to success as they are not only allies but also good mentors who lead to a better direction or provide a huge amount of information about a certain aspect that they specialize in.
On the other hand, in spite of the downsides given above, I believe that this trend should be considered as progress. The primary reason is that both parents have to work to support the whole family whereas kids are no longer expected to work. Furthermore, it costs so much to bring children up such as milk, diapers, tuition fees, etc and it is more difficult to raise a large family while having them under control. Take Finland, for example, each family has two to three children on average and some who want to live alone or couples who don't have kids, yet, it is the happiest country in the world for people to live in, according to the New York Times.
In conclusion, I believe that although living alone or in a nuclear family can cause relationship breakdown and bad behaviours in teens, it is a worthwhile development because it reduces stress in parenting and is financially stable for individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83190883191 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6820937111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621082621083 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0947599639 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210343858601 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759132097837 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591192352717 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135793197092 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561233321025 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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