In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend.
nowadays, civilians in cities prefer living alone or in small units to large family groups. somes support this as a special lifestyle. but others conquer the trend will create a space between the family members. In fact, both perspectives are right.
living alone may raise a sense of peaceful and free, but loneliness.You have freedom to do everything you like without noticing to people around you.You have your freedom to live like what in your imagination and no one will interfere your life anymone. that's the ideal life of almost youth in modern society. Although there will have sometime they could be so lonely in their own house but that's nothing to young people. As the youth always dream of being free to go every where, to discover the world themself. when people were young, they tend to live alone.when they are older and older, they tend to live with their parents in a small-shaped family structure. Because their dream of loneliness is still have but they need to live and take care of their parents only.
large family groups are now being blurred. people nowadays seem to not like the warm atmosphere that extended family bring to them. but we can not denied that the extended family is still important to our society. living in a large family group may help the whole members take care of each other. when a part of the family encounter an accident, he or she may received some help from their relatives as soon as it has happened. Maybe, an extended family makes we rich of emotions. Nuclear family is good and the extended family is good, too. In my opinions, we should choose to live alone while we are still young. we need to an large family groups when we are becoming mature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66777408638 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30460401276 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6570905971 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9473684211 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292299536165 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963738998694 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877159800731 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215139930983 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894946695778 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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