In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
An increasing number of people today are in favour of visiting fast food restaurants due to their fast-paced lifestyle and irregular working hours. In many cultures, convenient food has posed a threat to the traditional cooking styles. Emphasis should be put on the potential problems arise from this change.
In some countries, for example, the United States, fast food has already been a health issue, where the number of overweight people is increasing dramatically. This is not only because fast food is high in fat, sugar, salt and calories but also due to they often come in large portion. More often than not, people suffer from obesity have a higher risk of contracting heart diseases and other health problems than those normal-weight people, meaning that the government has to pour more money in building healthcare systems, which may hold back the economy growth.
Another problem is that fast food has a negative effect on people’s lifestyles, including dietary habits. The characteristic of traditional dishes is their diversity of food preparation, cooking methods, and taste, which shows the changes of cooking culture in different regions. On the contrary, most of the fast food chains nowadays provide food from the United States or Europe, such as hamburgers, fried chicken and pizzas. As a consequence, people’s diet is becoming less diverse and some traditional recipes may disappear with time.
Furthermore, convenient food also exert an adverse impact on family relationships, due to the fact that people are not as willing to join family gatherings as they used to be. Generally, family get-togethers provide families with a precious opportunity to communicate with each other and improve mutual understanding. If people eat outside frequently, they may not keep update with the news about their families and pay less attention to the emotional needs of their families. This is the reason why family are becoming dispersed and many people are feeling lonely and helpless when confronting with problems in daily lives.
According to what has been mentioned above, I agree that the spread of convenient food is a serious problem as it not only threaten people’s health but also have a damaging influence on our cuisine culture and social relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35164835165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90555326328 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.769632218 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.866666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247959507978 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896802108638 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496988126646 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13935526286 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474933478225 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.