At the out set of new millenium, food is maiden requirement of everyone not only for survival but also to get several types of food taste. It is started that, in different countries traditional food is being extincted by international fast food. No, this has donot have negative effects on both families and societts. My point of view will be articulted in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to conclusion.
It is noteworthy mention that, in present time people are always in search of fast food. Thr main factor behind this circumatance is taste and time due to which people are now related with working sector both female and male. So, it is hard for them manage a time for preparing food and students also spend almost eight-night hours in school. However, children and people prefer to buy fast food fron outside owing to its save their time. Hence, it is enough to prove that why fast food have positive impact on people life.
In addition to, the second main factor of fast food is less expensive than traditional food. For example:- India survey defined that fast food cast is only 50Rs but traditional food much more expensive than fast food like, domestic food cast is 5000Rs. So it deasy for citizens to purchase fast food from market instead of traditional food. Therefore, with these reasons people are favouring in fast food than traditional food.
To sum up, after analization whole point of view from my mind, people must also taste other country's food to get a difference between there own food and other countries food. Citizens must also learn other countries culture instead of by only learning their own culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86738351254 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46725709285 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0962689076 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362476127648 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14342792932 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949792127255 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230816606882 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909236570505 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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