It is true that, fast food is popular nowdays among people and it also has taken place of traditional food. I personally introspect that it is a negative impact on families as well as societies.
To start with, fast food is not healthy. However, mostly people prefer to eat fast food than traditional food. Many people also have addicted to this. It has more causes like it effects directly on people health, heart, liver e.t.c. it is increased obesity, diabetes beacuse in fast food contains lots of sugar. and people have to face some types of health issues. furthermore, they do not know the value of traditional food because it have lots of nutrients in this food. For example, many young children have addict of fast food nowadays that is why this generation is not fit.
Looking at the other view, parents do not have more time to make meals for their children because job is done nowdays by many parents. In addition, they make fast food for children beacuse it is cheaper than traditional food, it is take less time to make, easily available for any store, it has a good taste. Moreover, fast food also helps to increase the economy rate. For instance, those students who live far away from their house for studying or doing job so they mostly prefer fast food rather than traditional food.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, fast food is good for those who do not have time to make meals yet. We must understand that we should only eat nutritional food beacuse it is good for people health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that we should only eat nutritional food beacuse it is good for people health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67669172932 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3856516085 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0820317576 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304636249644 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128808623497 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633849620515 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202550020977 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612990108251 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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