It is true that, crime is escalating day by day and it is the great issue in the world. The main reasons are unemployment, poverty, overpopulation. Government and people must fight together against crime.
To start with, the first main reason of crime is unemployment, because people do not have job for doings and they are unable to feed their families. Due to this reason, people are taking heinous steps like kidnapping, stealing, robbing, e.t.c. For example, population is rising continuously as well as poverty but jobs are still same it is a worrying trend.
Another reason could be, a wealthy family because parents give high pocket money to their children and some children join bad company after that they bunk their classes and jump the walls of school. In addition, they also waste their money in clubs and in smoking. When parents know that their children is going on wrong direction and they stop giving pocket money so children steal money from their own home. Furthermore, they beat anyone for money.
Looking for solutions, government should take more steps for increasing employment and reduce for population. It is a only method to stop crime. Parents should know about their children that in which Direction their children are going if they are going in wrong direction so it is a parents responsibility to teach that what is wrong or right for them.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly unemployment, poverty, overpopulation these all are interlinking with each other so this is the main reasons of crime. If government would focus on these things then crime would stop automatically.
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate 56
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 73
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60 it could cause problems Do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: jobbed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt should take more steps for increasing employment and reduce for population. It...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r so this is the main reasons of crime. If government would focus on these things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04868913858 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73619537663 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3153701601 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111394359231 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506373708425 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520353016755 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791157336668 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462260355379 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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