In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married . some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and their for do not require the financial security that marriage bring.
to what extent do you agree ?
marriage is a beautiful relationship as two souls become as one spirit. While there are those who believe that marriage is not essential for women as they can work and make money. I believe that there are 2 reasons why women are not married. This essay will discuss these reasons and gives some explanation of my opinion.
Firstly, women do not want to get married as they think that they will carry most of the responsibility. In the past when women married they stayed at home and men went to work as men carried whole responsibility. today, women work, bring up their children and share in-house expenses. For example:” in Egypt, rate of divorce increased between 2016 and 2018 by 3.2 percent mostly due to lack of men responsibility”. if men carry most of the responsibility, women would think about marriage.
Another point to consider is education which is the other reason women do not get married. In the last decades women married without being educated or they may illiterate, however nowadays women obtaining degree of bachelor and have ambitious towards PhD. For instance, there are many differences in learning between past and present as women can carry out more tasks and have good place in society. At the present, women educated as men or even more than them which leads to thinking of women towards learning and forgetting about marriage.
In conclusion, women do not want to get married for the reasons we have finished above. if men have more responsibility women would think about marriage. I completely agree that there is no need for women to get marriage as they become more educated and have their own money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88214285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6937545871 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7378024589 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284624007938 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106893725939 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670791496793 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189026133419 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568607523825 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.