Many criminals re-offended after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Ex-offenders can still continue to commit crime after release into society. For me, there are many reasons behind this, however some practical methods can solve this problem.
Key reasons that cause re-offending are poverty, unemployment and lack of education. Firstly, people who were sentenced to prison cannot look for a job for making a living because of their criminal records. Therefore they have no other way to afford their daily living except illegal activity that is a wide range of offences from minor crimes like pickpocket to serious crimes like drug tracking and murder. Secondly, ex-offenders received insufficient training of reintegration programs before being released from prison to reintegrate back into society. For example, they do not be educated enough vocational knowledge that enables them to have a job after prison.
To deal with this matter, some feasible measures should be implemented with support of government and local residents. Firstly, the government and local authority should create chances for people who have been punished to have a suitable job covering their own lives such as public area cleaners, security guards or sport trainers. Secondly, law-abiding citizens give ex-offenders chances for rehabilitation. It is necessary and meaningful for prisoners to be treated as usual people and not recalled their past lives. Finally, it is beneficial to build vocational training that prepares prisoners for release into community. This programs need to be set up based on ability and experiences of each convict.
Poverty, unemployment and lack of training are main reasons that lead to re-offending, however this problem would reduce based on some possible solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ving because of their criminal records. Therefore they have no other way to afford their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53992395437 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83896263256 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9044101717 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272942238156 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860808086916 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613387243223 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162249804495 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616737873012 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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