Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is thought that many different nations have most store and products as the similar, some people believe it a benefit improvement, whereas other consider it negative. From my point of view, these notions have both advantages and drawbacks for the resident life. The following essay will analyse these statements in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearance of modern technology that the requirement of individuals have increased gradually, so the various of local brand is greatly significant for the society development. Not only does this phenomenon provide the best exerience and numerous valuable production for the citizens which improve their mentality life, but also the propotion of unemployment and homeless people can be reduced since more occupations can be created such as client or transportation staff which lead positive affection for the economic background of their country. Furthermore, the socioeconomic trouble will be narrowed where all people have same opportunity to aproach with the high quality production. To illustrate, there was a survey by Kevin Clame, the famous interviewer and professor, who is an expert about the success of european nations where their government pay attention to advance their local market. The statistics demonstrated that nearly every countries have got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the weakness of this problems for the society. The consumers will struggle to distinguish the authentic production. If the customer access with the low quality one, they will suffer from some physical issues such as cardiovascular disease. Moreover, some researchers noted that the regions also correlate with a wide range of cognitive behaveiour, including memory, self-monitoring and conscious self-awareness, so many local people have difficulty aproaching with the international production, a lot of harmful influence will led by this habit to the young generation.
To conclude, though my argument from the essay, i mostly agree with the strength of this phenomenon, but it still have some negative aspects for the society. The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l analyse these statements in detail. First of all, in the industrialized worl...
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...tries have got plenty of achievement. However, we can not negate the weakness ...
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...ever, we can not negate the weakness of this problems for the society. The consumers...
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...y this habit to the young generation. To conclude, though my argument from the...
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...rength of this phenomenon, but it still have some negative aspects for the society. ...
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, whereas, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53235294118 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06350744322 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.1551536581 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.357142857 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168289171617 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580357433699 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789768871325 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115104821561 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753668569843 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.