Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.
Why do you think this happens?
How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
Exercise play a significant role in today’s life. In that day to day exercise is good for aged people.However,many unhealthy people do not accept it as a routine due to fail to remember and weakness.
As a matter of fact, patients are mostly alone and isolated because of this they have not sufficient energy for exercise. Also they are worried about their health instead of getting out of it . Therefore, they are not in the mood of exercise.
This problem can be solved by family members. Patients familiar should motivate them to do light exercises such as yoga,morning walk. Also they should be given household work so they feel active
In the bottom line, the essay has been explored from the problem and solution side with enough discussion and it allows me to write that problems are there but given idea if followed with it’s right purpose then it can be affective not only in the present time but in the future time as well
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Exercise play a significant role in today’s life. In ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...to day exercise is good for aged people.However,many unhealthy people do not accept it ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...exercise is good for aged people.However,many unhealthy people do not accept it as a ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ave not sufficient energy for exercise. Also they are worried about their health ins...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...heir health instead of getting out of it . Therefore, they are not in the mood of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they are not in the mood of exercise. This problem can be solved by family mem...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , morning
... them to do light exercises such as yoga,morning walk. Also they should be given househo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ht exercises such as yoga,morning walk. Also they should be given household work so ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...given household work so they feel active In the bottom line, the essay has been e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lows me to write that problems are there but given idea if followed with it’s rig...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
... there but given idea if followed with it’s right purpose then it can be affective ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63073054755 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.0547519246 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219995911833 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871040131897 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679062284251 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118592177226 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800083109999 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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