Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
There is a worrisome issue being mentioned by the majority of medical practitioners that the current lifestyle of several modern people does not include the physical workouts, which is the decisive factor to lead to a healthy and well-being lifestyle. This tendency resulted from several causes and measures should be taken to tackle it
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations for physical inactivity in modern society. First and foremost, there is one of the numerous consequences of urbanization and industrialization. There seem to be shreds of evidence that in many nations, especially the developed ones, the recreational playgrounds are being taken place by the apartment building or other commercial institutions. This phenomenon resulted in a shortage of playing field for having physical exercises or participating in outdoor competitions. Another reason is the inadequate allocation of time. It is irrefutable that people nowadays are living in a more competitive and hectic world when compared with the past few decades. They reportedly engulfed with professional work to earn for living and, therefore, leaving no time for indulging in physical workouts on a daily basis. An illustration of this is that a standard office holder spending an average of ten hours daily remains in the workplace and often wearily heading home.
Fortunately, there can be several potential measures to combat this problem. In the first place, outdoor recreational activities should be organized more frequently. This is shown by the annual marathons around the city has become one of the traditional festivals in many places throughout the world. Secondly, exercises should be uttermost facilitated in both the occupational and the educational system. Introducing the gymnastic room in offices can be an effective way to ensure the company staff taking routine physical workout in their breaktime. Furthermore, there should be compulsory hours of physical education in the curriculum
To summarize, the physical inactivity is originated from the shortage of playground and the competitive and hectic lifestyle. Hence, organizing more competition event or introducing the gymnastic system in both office and school is worth considering
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16739555202 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4680824259 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125412776827 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422273546997 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384590814409 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715874985216 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318608064997 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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