Many elderly people are are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend
In recent years, more senior citizens are being placed in retirement homes by their relatives instead of caring for them by themselves. Although this trend has some upsides such as giving family members the time to take care of their own needs and ensuring that the appropriate care is given to these individuals, it also has some downsides.
On the one hand, placing advanced family members in care homes has some benefits. Firstly, it allows their relatives who cater for them the opportunity to attend to their personal concerns. Since caring for the aged may be time consuming, seeking the services of these institutions creates time to attend to other pursuits such as a career, spouse or child. Secondly, these centers are equipped to provide specialized care for the aged. Old age is often accompanied by health problems requiring expert care which can be received in these homes for the elderly.
On the other hand, admitting aged relatives into these establishments has some demerits. One of such drawbacks is that being separated from their families and familiar surroundings may lead to depression for such ones. That is to say, they may experience difficulties adjusting to a new environment and this will likely take an emotional toll on them. Another problem associated with this trend is that it may cause estrangement among the family members involved. This is because these aged individuals may grow resentful towards their relatives, attributing being placed in a care home to abandonment.
To sum up , placing old members of the family in care homes has some merits. However, the extreme sadness experienced by those placed in homes for the aged, along with the rift it creates between relatives are important minus points to considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12847222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73805421588 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7956297316 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178908573407 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739137259411 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456680429183 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126744023067 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325141713771 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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