It is true that nursing homes have become a popular choice in caring elderly people. In this essay, I will analyse both upsides and downsides of this form.
On the one hand, I am convinced that the benefits of living care homes are obvious. One compelling point is that these facilities provide expert medical attention, we are no longer concerned about proper nutrition for optimal health of our loved one. For example, it's important to have a proper menu which can not only constrain carbs but also provide enough calories for diabetes people and the ingredients are calculated exactly by nutritionists. Furthermore, there are trained staff who supply consistent full-time support and around-the-clock care, so that the oldster can set aside safety worries and enjoy their life with social activities celebrated annually in care homes. Another advantage of the facilities is that it can decrease time, resource and demands on family members who are in the hustle and bustle or do not provide enough conditions to look after their relatives.
However, nursing homes certainly have some major drawbacks, the first downside in the expenses, many people can not afford to pay for constant care which may affect to quality of caring homes when they choose facilities with low standards and sub-quality care. You have to be careful about where you place your loved one. According to The Guardian's Cost of Care Survey, on average in HCM city, the average annually costs of nursing homes care being between $250 - $500 per month, this become a subsistence burden for family members. Moreover, there is not always a facility near your home, you also spend more expenses to travel long distances to visit your relatives. The second downside is dependence on an individual's condition. Nursing homes can increase a sense of isolation and loneliness because the elderly almost be always surround by people of their age and there are also rules that can be strict to ensure the best condition of life for them.
In conclusion, care homes offer great benefits as well as drawbacks and people can choose carefully what kind of looking after their loved one based on their condition they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'staffs', 'staves'?
Suggestion: staffs; staves
...ionists. Furthermore, there are trained staff who supply consistent full-time support...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ford to pay for constant care which may effect to quality of caring homes when they ch...
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Line 5, column 820, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'be' and 'surround'.
Suggestion: be always surround
...d loneliness because the elderly almost always be surround by people of their age and there are al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04709141274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58234550115 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584487534626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7282987309 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.142857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28115053205 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905168685637 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630194619299 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180994027726 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229472974324 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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