Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Today, there is an increasing number of young people intending to send their ageing parents to nursing homes due to the huge physical benefits that the old can receive from them. However, there remains some drawbacks that the young should consider before placing their loved ones in there.
On the one hand, it is an indisputable fact that nursing homes are well equipped and provide professional health care. Their personnel are qualified in the field of geriatrics and know how to deal with the needs of the elderly as well as reacting appropriately in case of any emergency. Besides professional care, retirement homes also have proper and modern facilities to ensure timely administration of medicines and record is also kept for future treatment.
On the other hand, staying with their own family can greatly benefit elders in ways that nursing homes can hardly do. By living near family members, elders will be less likely to experience loneliness and isolation, common reasons for depression and other mental diseases. On the contrary to popular consensus, due to higher standard of life and progress in medicine, older people in these days are much stronger and still able to shoulder responsibilities for their family in various ways such as playing with their grandchildren or taking care of bonsai trees. Therefore, keeping the elderly in their family would allow them to live optimistically and get rid of their thought that they are a burden to their children.
By way of conclusion, as mentioned above, nowadays many elderly people are able to remain healthy and active, they should be given the chances to participate in family and social activities. Only when their health becomes a serious problem, a nursing home should be taken into consideration.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14532871972 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74579629203 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.305020041 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252807210482 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941351389387 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366312976759 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143821940226 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386280354605 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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