many factors motivate people in the workplace. Of these, money is the most important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At the workplace, people have various motivations to make them work harder. It is a common belief that money is the most important. Personally, i totally agree with this point of view
If you want the workplace become a place of inspiration for employee, firstly, it must be a good and energetic environment. Secondly, the colleagues are always friendly, sociable and often help others. So people feel comfortable when they work together. One example, when i got off work, my motorbike was broken down but i was lucky because i saw my colleague and he helped me to fix it. Finally, on the special occasions, the company gives presents for staffs to incentate. For example, on Tet holiday, members of agency have been 13th salary bonus 1 calendar.
Certainly, money is the most significant in our life and so is the workplace. Initially, money help people to earn a living. For instance, money can buy foods, clothes, household appliances and take care of family. In addition, money also people have a better quality of life. In particular, when people make money , they can have a journey with family members or friends to relax after a long time work hard
In conclusion, i would agree that money is an dispensable thing for workforce in the working environment. Thus, money is the most motivative in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76612382042 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9897949359 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7857142857 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191283220275 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731844108868 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579336708221 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133363398804 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529659313053 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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