Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that improvement in many feilds play an important role with the development of one country. While many authorities supposed that focusing on develop economic is the most vital aim , I believe that apart from economic, there are many categories progress contribute to develop for a nation.
On the one hand, there are variety of reasons why ecenomic progress is a curical goal of one country. Country has potential in economic bring many benefits for residents. In other words, if governments concentrate on improve economic, they will have sources to invest in facilities and policies to enahnce standard of living for inhabitants. In addition, when nation have advantage in economic, they will create more jobs for people with the expand of many companies.Therefore, the percentage of porverty and crime have happened because of the lack of money will decrease.
On the other hand, education and heath progress are equally with the development of nation. In terms of education, no one can deny the power of education to one country. Education provide knowledge and advantage for students who will become the future of one country. When they are invested, they will create more things such as equipment, theorys which bring benefits and position for their own country when compare with other nation. In term of health, the labour force contribute to the development of one country. Own nation have many young people rather than old people will have more advantage in the process expand nation. Although old people cannot work to create revenue but they have experice and knowlege can teach for young people. Therefore, authorities should invest in health for residents, especially for young generation to ensure they will have enough conditions to work.
In conclusion, economic progress is essential for the development of one country, it seems to me that government should combine invest in education and health to expand the power of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17981072555 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77304291685 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482649842271 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.360406211 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183062380317 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719013410207 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448609650941 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128364496284 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193365692988 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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