In many many counties, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many countries, these days, men and women work full-time. For this reason, I feel that men and women should share household tasks. When men help women at home, it becomes easier for women to handle household tasks.
The notion that women should stay at home and take care of the house had started because only men used to work. However, these days we observe that men and women are competing equally, at every level. We see many women entrepreneurs become successful. So, it is only fair that men and women share household work because women also spend a considerable amount of their day at work. By doing this, both men and women can focus on their work.
If only women are given the responsibility to do chores at home, they won't be able to focus on their work. I have seen many couples sharing household tasks. As a result, both men and women are successful in their careers. It is a man's responsibility to offer a woman help. Every person, irrespective of their gender must learn basic life skills such as cleaning and cooking. I have seen many girls being told that they must learn cooking and cleaning because of their gender, this must be stopped. Girls should also be taught to prioritize their careers.
Overall, to recapitulate, it is logical for men and women to share household tasks as both work full-time. This makes it easy for women at home and hence they can focus on their career. Young boys and girls must learn how to cook and clean as well as how to prioritize their career. Gender should not be a deciding factor as to who does chores at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 431, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...y girls being told that they must learn cooking and cleaning because of their gender, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, as to, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59717314488 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36615647204 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469964664311 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8983529142 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4736842105 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397191077713 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158295138843 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134852323627 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302330038539 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138425996888 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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