Nowadays, sedentary lifestyle is the important component to create health issues, which are the facing by humankind, I completely agree with this statement. The reason of my agreement will describe in following paragraphs.
There are physical problems which is develop by inactive life pattern of people. Due to this, human body deceased their function and activities. So, it will be leads to dysfunction of individual's body organ. People can easily suffer from sickness. There were many health issues arrived due to sedantary lifestyle l such as, obesity, diabetes, cardiovascular disease and more. For example, according to world health organization, 60 to 80% of the population does not engage in enough activity. Making physical inactivity the fourth leading risk factor for global mortality.
On the other hsnd, individuals may suffering from mental disorders due to inactiveness in their life. Most of people habitual with their inactive lifestyle, therefore, they can not active in their own life. Also, people cannot concentrate on their thoughts and in some programmes. Sedantary life pattern impact on humans' mind therefore human being suffer from psychological disease such as, mental deprivation, lack of interest, depression and anxiety. Apart from this, while children can not engage in extracurricular activities, so they can't develop physical growth as well as mental growth.
In summary, there are many troubles if people living in sedantary lifestyle, it can disturbing the progress of individual. I am strongly agree that people should became active and doing creative things for their better health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: developed
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Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'disturb'
Suggestion: disturb
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54435483871 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89040347219 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0067268021 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117010922086 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384631308459 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334679666713 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800433761647 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322143083946 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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