Some people believe that, it is unavoidable that if technology develop than cultural believes will be hidden. So, people can not have together these two things. I completely agree with this notion. In my essay, I will describe the reason of my agreement.
Basically, technical development is helpful for betterment of mankind as well as worldwide. People should get information about unknown topics with the help of internet. Besides this, as technology develop, people can easily contact to strangers also they can chat with each other. For examplify, Facebook is the best site to talk to unknown person and make a friendship with them as well as they can share photos and videos. Apart from this, few companies give advertisements of their products through technical help to spread information about products.
Subsequently, the technology also useful to maintain culture and regulation of traditions. In India, there are some programmes are perform in television about religious. Nowadays, people can watch the movies and serials based on tradition, with the help of computer. So, people can provide knowledge to the future generation about customs, cultures and more. For example, if people whom from outside India, they can see the images of historical places and videos. Therefore, tourism rate will be increased and they may get knowledge about Indian cultures.
Although, technical advancement is good for development of country as well as for public. I believe that, for maintenance of local rituals and tradition, technology must necessary and there are no any bad impact of technical development of tradition.
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- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing 90
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...hat if technology develop than cultural believes will be hidden. So, people can not have...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson and make a friendship with them as well as they can share photos and videos...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...In India, there are some programmes are perform in television about religious. Nowadays...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...technology must necessary and there are no any bad impact of technical development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85299621492 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7313394585 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7058823529 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103389165192 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390034503033 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499442117038 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778033834564 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749966184398 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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