Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people .why is this case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places ?
It is certainly true that museums and historical places are often visited by foreign tourists but local people do not show interest in archeological monuments. There are various reasons why people are not interested and it also have remedial measures to solve this problem.
To begin with, nowadays people are busy to earn bread and butter for their family members. For instance- men are busy in their office work and women have household chores, so it is not possible for them to visit historical sites. Another reason, of this problem is that people do not want to learn about their culture because that have adopted western culture. Furthermore,the historical places take charge for people to visit sites. Some people are economically deprived and they do not have much time so they avoid to visit historical places.
On the other hand, there are various measures to solve this problem. First of all, authority need to take an action and they should not charge money to visit places. Television should telecast the historical places so people get attracted
towards historical places and visit with family or friends.For example- some countries telecast the historical places so that people visit historical places.
In gist, I would like to say that it is the duty of the government to solve the problem and they have to educate the people so that they know about their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, for example, for instance, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50435800138 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497835497835 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6015803699 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309387188881 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126615806728 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928702547839 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190762026621 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899995050399 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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