Being a celebrity such as film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Nowadays, the importance of celebrity plays a crucial role in humans life. However, most people think that being a celebrity like film star or sports personality have advantage and disadvantage sometimes. In my opinion, I partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, their are various advantages for celebrity. Firstly, film star or sports personality can fulfill there all dreams because of wealth. Moreover, they always live a luxurious life with all the amenities and they do not have any stress. Furthermore, they visit every place according to their desire and spend time with their fans so that they become more famous. For instance, one of my favourite actor, ranbir Kapoor visit Canada and spend time with their wife . He said that Canada is her dream country.
However, there are disadvantage also for celebrity. First of all, they cannot hide their privacy because of media. Media always ready to show their personal life in front of public. Moving further, celebrity also have risk of lives so they cannot roam alone. For example, some haters are always trying to hurt the celebrity. Last month, my favourite actor parmish Verma visited the temple then hater shoot her. Some people are not happy and they feel jealous from celebrity success . Then they spread fake rumours so that people do not like them and their reputation is spoil in the eyes of public and public started to unfollow them.
In gist, I would like to say that being a celebrity is not a piece of cake so it is our responsibility to not spoil the image of the person or not spread the false information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.476067263 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4209692376 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156902765858 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498299506134 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669011066277 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119049649684 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061829741101 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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