Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.
Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It seems like museums and historical relics are the ideal destinations to visit in many travellers' thought more than native ones. In fact, there have some reasons for this case and of course, it could be solved by some effective solutions relatively.
On the one hand, the first reason why museums and historical sites attract less local residents because they are too familiar to nearby inhabitants. Many local people maybe will find nothing could interesting them anymore in such places or because they had been in those destinations for a couple of times hence they get bored. The different thing will absolutely happen not in the same way with tourists when those museums or historical relics still have mythical things or valuable history truths they desire to discover. That will urge them to explore sooner or later because those sites could’ve been started something which is their impulse and curiosity.
The second thing is, sometimes entrance tickets at some historical sites are expensive for the local inhabitants to afford. It is one of the primary reasons why museums or historical relics couldn’t have a stable amount of visitors who are local residents even worse when actually the number of local residents was fallen gradually every year
On the other hand, although they have to face with some serious problems about how to equalize the number of visitors who come from inside and outside the local but we can believe that there’s always has some solutions to cope with those matters of fact. Firstly, museums ought to be invested in more by the authorities to refresh the exhibits. It will help to create more sense of satisfaction when visitors come to those destinations especially with native people. They will not feel bored and will have more excitement which pushes their motivation at a higher level then they will want to spend their time to discover something really attractive and worthy.
Secondly, historical relics need to be free to all the local people because they live there and they could be a potential group who will advertise freely to the world about the most famous and popular sites in their home. Each and every one of them plays a vital role like ambassadors picture during the process of spreading reputation and images of all the beautiful destinations to the outsiders.
In conclusion, we always have effective ways to resolve some existing problems to attract more local residents in the near future and to keep control and certain about the number of visitors included tourists and native ones steadily to guarantee about the durability of those destinations' development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...al people maybe will find nothing could interesting them anymore in such places or because ...
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Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'Each one'.
Suggestion: Each one
...famous and popular sites in their home. Each and every one of them plays a vital role like ambassa...
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Line 17, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'destinations'' or 'destination's'?
Suggestion: destinations'; destination's
...guarantee about the durability of those destinations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, in conclusion, in fact, of course, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11034482759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60003353739 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508045977011 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1396599604 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.785714286 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0714285714 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259748780782 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921595641862 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538766364078 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13570826449 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038467277957 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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