Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Heritage sites and museums are the one of the attractive places in any cities of tourists. However, those historical sites and museums are not get that much attraction from their native people. This essay explains steps that can help to gain attension at such places by local people.
First of all from the tourist's point of view, Many countries have higher heritage values because of action took places on those countries' land such as india and egypt. In terms of museums that could be representing history, science & engineering are some of the category. Most of the international tourists are excited to explore new country and their culture. Due to this reasons most of them visit museums and historical sites on their tour. For example, tourists from westen countries have kinn interest to explore the history and rich culture of countries like india and china. On to the point of local people not visiting museums and historical sites, they are grown around those places so they visited those places in past or in their childhood. In somecase, they get to knowledge about those places in their education life or through their's grandparents afterward they find it boring or useless to visit such places.
To change such mentality of local people, commity that runs and maintains museums and historical sites should step in to gain attraction in native people by hosting events on different ocassions. Charges to visit by local people should be reduce that way people no need to worries about money. In a off sessions at those places government should sponser local schools to visit those places.
In conclusion, taking simple steps by authority's of museums and historical sites help to spread awareness and attraction in local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09027777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49495605923 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503472222222 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1569341456 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396029592946 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144646399573 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767931636114 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263228998088 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384496470143 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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