Many museums and historical sites are not visited by local people.
What are the causes of this and what can be done about it?
It is obvious that many local people seem to be not interested in museums and historical sites. In this essay, I will explain the causes of this condition and give some solutions to tackle it.
There are many causes that can be attributed to this phenomenon. First of all, they are already familiar with their culture and history and perhaps have nothing new to discover when visiting the same museum repeatedly. The artifacts, relics, paintings, or other things that display in the museums are unchanged for a long time, which makes them become boring. If there is nothing new for local inhabitants to discover, they tend to travel to other places to experience new cultures, architecture, and artworks. Another reason is museums and historical sites charge an entry fee, which could be the major factor that discourages the local people. If a person visited it once, they would avoid visiting it again because nobody wants to pay again to watch the same artwork. Besides, families struggling to pay for essential items, the entrance fee can become a barrier and a trip to the museum is not going to be a priority.
Nevertheless, several solutions to solve this problem. To begin with, the government should invest more money to refurbish and improve the quality of the display to accommodate the needs of visitors. Not only do theme exhibits be arranged in periodically changing permutations, but also arts exchanges should also be done among different museums to breathe new life into the displays. Furthermore, museums and the historical site should provide free access. If museums charge for entry, this will inevitably deter many potential visitors, especially the poor and those whose educational and cultural opportunities have already been limited.
In conclusion, museums and historical sites are less attractive to local residents because they are too familiar with these places. Therefore, the government should take some steps to tackle this issue like renovating periodically or freeing the entrance fee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20245398773 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74306546492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7359245282 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330404335462 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109407165456 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088713828208 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203321410271 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631501300725 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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