Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After graduating high school, many students often find it difficult to choose between continuing to study and getting a job. Although there are a lot of advantages to working right after school, I think that studying at university or college is a better option.
Getting a job straight after high school is beneficial in some ways. First of all, people are able to earn money on their own. In this way, they can become independent without their family’s financial support. Secondly, starting to work as soon as possible can help people have more opportunities to gain real experience and learn practical skills from their profession. This helps them climb up their career ladder easily.
On the other hand, I believe that students can gain more benefits if they choose to continue their education after high school. First, nowadays, there are a lot of professions that require academic qualifications. For instance, it is impossible to become a doctor without having a relevant degree. As a result, people who graduate university or college will have access to more and better job opportunities and tend to get higher salaries than those without a university education. Secondly, the job market is becoming more and more competitive. Most employers tend to hire candidates with qualifications acknowledged by a college or university. Having a degree will help people find it easier to successfully get a job which they have a burning desire for.
In conclusion, both getting a job after high school and continuing higher studies have their own benefits. I think that students are more successful in their career if they keep on studying further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18148148148 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86400728402 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8751633272 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273785124481 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901836198615 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079857941088 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182552700949 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483709334375 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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