Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Visitor of the museum has been increased nowadays, meanwhile, majority museums taking entry fees from the visitor. However, few section of people opposed this and believe that it should be free, while I believe that it has more pros than the cons.
It is true that, museum become expensive to visit, there are several benefit of this trend like, Firstly, Entry charge will give financial stability to the museum authority for their maintenance charges. For example, There madam tusad museum in the London taking visiting charge, that fund would help them to development of the museum and also help to keep up to date with latest technology. Secondly, it financial freedom provide museum independent, They have not to relay on the government about any kind of grant and donation, it would also reduce burden of the government. Finally, It would attract genuine visitor who have true importance and interest in the history. This will reduce traffic in the venue therefor visitor could fill great experience during visit.
In contrast, Museum are the national treasure and all common men have their fundamental rights to know their history so that museum always free to visit. By this anyone could access and know their existence and culture. Furthermore, this is central responsibility to run and preserve museum and should be free of cost for all their citizen because they are already paying tax. For instance, there are many museum under the authority of England in London which are totally free of cost to visit.
In conclusion, I personally believe that Government should make all museum free for their nation, that is their fundamental rights, while minimum charge of the entry of the museum will be more important for their modern development and to maintain their glory without giving any extra load of center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sections'.
Suggestion: few sections
...g entry fees from the visitor. However, few section of people opposed this and believe that...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'several benefits'.
Suggestion: several benefits
...um become expensive to visit, there are several benefit of this trend like, Firstly, Entry char...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...museum and also help to keep up to date with latest technology. Secondly, it financial free...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'museums'?
Suggestion: museums
...aying tax. For instance, there are many museum under the authority of England in Londo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4612643544 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3832666298 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258943306616 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096973887978 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709122644258 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166770644576 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258608012844 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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