Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
The topic of entrance fees are required in a variety of museums has sparked some debates. Whether, it is more beneficial for the entry permission to be free of charge or not, this essay will delve into the pros and cons of this issue, while simultaneously offering an impartial view from my personal perspective.
On one hand, it is apparent that by establishing admisson fees, museums will be more profitable as they don't normally receive any funds other than from the authorities. Within the revenue earned, it would stand a great opportunity to upgrade the or even expand the place.
Similarly, the method of earning income out of public money may lessen pressure placed upon the government if the museum is popular and attracts a lot of tourists and citizens. Administration have to funded for schools, hospitals, etc. Therefore, museums will no longer be dependant on governments as they have the money to maintain the exhibit space themselves.
On the contrary, it can be seen that museums play a crucial role in education and culture of one nation. Consequently, this may discourage the public to visit, especially the poor and ones who opt to acquire knowledge within the gallery since free access is essential to provide freedom of cultural and educational opportunity.
Another noteworthy drawback is that museums which require payments often seen a decline in visitors compare to the one that doesn't charge people. A cogent account for this trend is that museums were originally opened freely for anyone and that visitors could stay as long as they want, this was until the idea of admission price was came up, an increasing number of people are opposing to this notion and that some said that they would only go to free entry museums.
I would like to conclude this by saying despite the advantages such as an increased in gaining rate and support the authorities, I personally side with the view that the drawback overweigh the benefitss and tthat museums' managers should not charge for admission in any possible ways due the result of limiting the educatonal and cultural visiting purposes as well as the decreased seen in the amount of guests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98347107438 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70313216098 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5975264508 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.75 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2555734332 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791930641595 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485947682607 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118246117814 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569595737798 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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