Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
A lot of museums need to pay charge that people can get the immission but some are free of charge. I think there are more advantage for museums to collect fee than free for people.
There are three main reasons why toll in the museums have more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, free fro people may be can attract more visitors to trip to a museum, but museums need to maintain by worker, also to hold a show in some places need to spend much money. If free for people, museums are difficult to open because the cost is too high which people can not enjoy some amazing artwork in the future.
Secondly, rechargeable museums may be have better feeling when they visit. When some in charge, people will measure the value, in this process not many people or not the big fan will spend money or time to enjoy it, which can build a quite and suitable environment for people to enjoy. If not charged, may be lead to noisy or crowded environment which will effect people feeling.
Finally, charge fro admission not only benefit for museums, but also benefit for artists. It is encourage artists to create some fantasy work and give them a positive respond. If the museums free for charge, people may be neglect the artists or productions.
In my opinion, the advantages of charging for entrance is overweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47289713693 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8432093256 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376095668223 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14929606726 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925222428744 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237064926631 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881653145299 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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