Many offender commits more crime after serving there first punishment why is this happening and what measures can be taken to take it to tackle the problem .
Crime has have ready plaged our society and tarnish the very fabric off of a system due to lack of proper cheques and balances an individual is indulged in offensive activities even after his punishment because of the societal stigma of being criminal. Owing to this they are indulged even more in further crime because our traditional society norms doesn’t acknowledge him. Going against the rule of law is one of the Major Crimes but with the technological advancement and involvement of big pockets the accountability has decreased for which offenders can easily break and go against official orders
Firstly, there should be proper checks and balances and strict punishments for offenders so that they could not go on wrong way. Even if he committed a crime again he would be punished more. secondly, our society is playing significant role in it by making someone hero and villain. We should also introduce some ways that they too could educate society to accept people who they are and does not reject them based on their past criminal records.
Thirdly, crime is very common in low status people because they are unable to meet daily demands and unable to win beard but nowadays even the upper class are also involved in criminal activities in order to maintain the status quo and match with people in their classes so to end this there should be equal rule of law for poor and proletariat and everyone would be held accountable if they found guilty.
There should be introduction of more and more jobs in society because people do crimes only when they become helpless besides this we should engage the offenders t encourage themto do better jobs rather committing crimes again
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89895470383 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51423124704 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.329744154 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.75 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183396292237 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885024528755 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653672784352 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119825143323 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388333923542 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.