The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world.
It is thought by some people that tourism sector across the world contributed a lot in making English most prominent language for which some people showed resentment that it might surpass their language and become only globally spoken language. Having single language would help a lot but there are some drawbacks as well.
Firstly, when we have only one language it would play dynamic role in enhancing economic growth, because all countries would be communicating easily without language barrier, besides people to people contact would also increase. Economy will see tremendous growth and countries will flourish with development and prosperity. There would be more trade and direct dealing among people which will help them in elevating their lifestyles.
On the other hand having one language could be very harmful for centuries old civilizations as their traditions, norms, values, ethos, folkways, and culture would be tarnished by having single language. Besides the tourism sector will not develop further because of similar culture and languages there would be no reason to travel and this would devastate many countries economically that rely on tourism as a source of income such as island countries.
To conclude this it can be said that having common language will exacerbates economic growth but maintaining local language should be prioritised to ensure the history.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'exacerbate'
Suggestion: exacerbate
...e said that having common language will exacerbates economic growth but maintaining local l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61347410808 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2744207175 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390598691128 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166873290609 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105301001656 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241391085335 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100887518564 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... but there are some drawbacks as well. Firstly, when we have only one language ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lp them in elevating their lifestyles. On the other hand having one language co...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of income such as island countries. To conclude this it can be said that hav...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'exacerbate'
Suggestion: exacerbate
...e said that having common language will exacerbates economic growth but maintaining local l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61347410808 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2744207175 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390598691128 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166873290609 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105301001656 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241391085335 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100887518564 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.