Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its disadvantages?
The option of rearing children domestically instead of entrusting child care responsibility to educational institutions has been widely adopted by parents. Notwithstanding the merits that kids derive from familial bonds, I believe it is overshadowed by the profound downsides of this approach.
For one thing, kids who are educated under the supervision and guidance of their relatives are likely to shoulder the future career that their forefathers have developed. Parents who decide to let their offspring study at home often work remotely or be self-employed, in order to provide full-time instruction for their offspring. In such conditions, children are more inclined to be led in the way in which their parents have embarked on. This individual-based teaching method is considerably advantageous to those who are going to inherit traditional domestic property, which is the career that passed down within generations merely. As a result, they will acquire a good grasp of conducting family business autonomously through personalized training programmes.
For another, I believe that there are subtle disadvantages of this child-rearing approach, leading to deficiency of skills and lack of competency for children. One thing considered, the environment that parents provide for their kids is deemed a form of safety zone but this would result in inferior competency, given the absence of opportunities to put more effort in the training process in order to equate peers and had they been familiar with the personalized curriculum, complying with the general programmes pose a challenging task to their learning abilities and adaptation in the future. Additionally, there are unique skills and activities that parents are incapable of monitoring and organizing during the learning process such as teamwork strategies or debate in front of the crowd. In this fierce society, these two primary features are important for those who seek rewarding jobs and kids who are unable to perform these skills will lose competitive edge to others.
To conclude, the option to raise children in a domestic environment is not effective in the abstract. The drawbacks of this trend undoubtedly outweigh the merits of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, such as, as a result, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49415204678 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14407986428 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2581183557 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138947321888 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491256750874 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386891081479 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819951939361 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319936203323 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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